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Black and white
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:21:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Were all taught whats right and wrong The world of black and white I can imagine it now Youre here in front of me and Im here in front of you With this entire, cruel, cold world Spinning and spinning out of control Leaving this wash of colour to fall upon us I suppose they all think theyre right Maybe we should be trapped in a cage A sign saying Forbidden on the door Its not whats important to me Because youre here in front of me and Im here in front of you While they all spin out of control Telling me Im wrong A thousand knives could stab me in the back Right now as I stand here, in the still of your eyes The pain would be non existent It would leave me untouched And leave you untouched Because as this crazy world of right and wrong Paints us all in black and white You stand here in front of me and Im here in front of you You paint me in this coat of colour Protecting me with your eyes Surrounding us in a brand new world Each layer bouncing them all off So as youre here in front of me and Im here in front of you Therell be no right Therell be no wrong Well paint the cage, well change the world
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Re: Black and white
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:08:17 PM AEST (User
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i love the attitude in this, it kicks butt! great writing... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Black and white
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 02:48:39 PM AEST (User
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I liked this one as well... great writing... it's almost like a forbidden love...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Black and white
(User Rating: 1 ) by dragonlover on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:23:25 PM AEST (User
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| nice one really thoughtful and caring it made me think so i guess thats good. |
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