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Whispered
Contributed by
Diatribe
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:29:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ridges cross my eyes
And all your needles
Become my disguise
This pain I feel
Could last a lifetime
So I decide so I hide
A wasted space, sinking to the floor
A common place, I will think no more
And when you lift me, my heart will beat again
So just pinch me, is this not a dream
They say Ill cry
A secret for us all
And when I die
It will remain untold
So my eyes
Will burn through you
Save me from the damage due
And when my mouth glues itself
Youll block your ears from the lack of sound
I will kiss your heart a fond farewell
So dont think Ill be coming back around
Copyright ©
Diatribe
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2004-05-27 17:29:04]
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Re: Whispered
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:06:24 PM AEST
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nice write. I coulld feel this one.
Nice work
Whisper |
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Re: Whispered
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 12:35:42 AM AEST
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| ive sed it b4, dude, u rok |
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