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What do you see....?
Contributed by
StrangeLittleGirl
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Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 08:32:30 AM in AEST
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What do you see, when you look up at the sky?
Clouds, birds airplanes?
I don't,
I see eternity, emptiness, forever.
When you look in the mirror, what do you see?
Your reflection staring back?
I don't,
I see ugliness, hurting and lies.
Why do I see these things?
I really don't know.
Maybe you could offer a suggestion?
Before I lose my mind.
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StrangeLittleGirl
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Re: What do you see....?
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by Twisterchaser on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 08:53:35 AM AEST
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You are correct there are two sides to every coin, the birds, planes, and clouds are in the emptiness. The silver lineing behind the clouds are caused by the sun we can't see most of the time; we only see the thunderstorms of life. A read that makes you think
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Re: What do you see....?
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 10:20:18 AM AEST
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| I see what you see....Very good poem. I've felt these things for so long, thank you for putting it into words. |
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Re: What do you see....?
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:21:20 AM AEST
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| I'm the eternal optomist... I see - possibility, I guess... no matter where I'm looking. Oh that doesn't mean I never felt as you did though! I just finally got to a place where no matter how ugly or awful something looks/feels... I kind of believe it that way for a reason. You got me thinking... love that! Great write! |
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Re: What do you see....?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:30:54 AM AEST
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I agree with the last comment. There is always something good within, no matter how buried it is.
I see beauty. a poets soul. :) |
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Re: What do you see....?
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by tinybitinsane on
Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 09:25:09 PM AEST
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i understand completely.. =/
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