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Daydream
Contributed by
LittleWillow
on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:16:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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jumping up, falling down
swirling, twirling, whirling 'round
through the wind, I'm flying free
walking on top of the mists of the sea
swinging high, swinging low
up and down I go
through the dew I feel the grass
it caresses my rough little feet as I pass
the chirping of doves I suddenly hear
brings an essence of peace to my ear
swinging high, swinging low
up and down I go
seconds before are gone and passed
but little sunlight and moonlight memories last
I'm like a fairy, flying with grace and care
my wings shall guide me everywhere
swinging high, swinging low
up and down I go
Copyright ©
LittleWillow
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2004-05-28 21:16:43]
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Re: Daydream
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:24:35 PM AEST
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| A worthy escape in my time of need. Thank you for sharing this one at this moment, it made me feel a little better |
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Re: Daydream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:26:15 PM AEST
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I love the way you write. I sometimes think dreams and wishes are the only thing that keeps us going sometimes. Daydreams can overcome a lot of unhappiness. A great escape into your own mind and your place of peace. Thank you for sharing this.
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Re: Daydream
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:35:01 PM AEST
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I love this its still one of my favorite things to do is swing and its like Im right there captivating write
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Re: Daydream
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:17:53 AM AEST
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Delightfully witty. A good write. Cheery and bright and my heart danced right along with the words.
Whisper |
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Re: Daydream
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:15:07 PM AEST
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| Another great one! you have a great flow here i really like your work!! |
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