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Raining
Contributed by
Saitou-sama
on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:36:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tonight I went out walking
In the rain, amongst the stars
Hidden beneath my overcoat
The fresh, still healing scars
You stopped me in the doorway
To tell me to keep safe
That you couldn't take it if you lost me
And not stay out too late
I hugged you then, and kissed you
And said that I would try
You'll never know how much I love you
You, who caused me not to die.
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Saitou-sama
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2004-05-28 21:36:50]
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Re: Raining
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:59:47 PM AEST
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I think my parents probably saved me more times than I could count with just their love, devotion and belief in me. I wish I had appreciated them more then than I did.
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Re: Raining
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by shelby on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 12:10:20 AM AEST
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this brought tears to my eyes so touching beautiful
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Re: Raining
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by brigitte7735 on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:01:57 PM AEST
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omg that is so beautiful, the smallest things you know, just knowing someone loves you. Im so going to cry.
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