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untitled
Contributed by
pa1602002
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Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:34:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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upon the fields of loss and sorrow
the seeds of change are sown
upon the oceans of turmoil and pain
the best sailors are made
upon the winds of grief and strife
the greatest pilots hone their skills
upon the desert of destruction and death
the tank crews do their best
within the evil and sadness of this time
A peoples freedom is born
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2004-05-29 01:34:08]
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Re: untitled
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by venkat on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:42:04 AM AEST
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| excellent..welcome to YPDC. Keep writing on...venkat |
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Re: untitled
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by bernard on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:19:45 AM AEST
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An excellent poem. you were wise not to put a title to it. after reading your poem I tried to give it a title but nothing seemed suitable. Welcome to the YPDC and full marks for the poem.
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Re: untitled
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by CarrieLynn on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:20:49 PM AEST
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| wow thats a really meaningful poem... it says a lot in a little... very good poem... carrie |
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Re: untitled
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:01:54 PM AEST
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| well done. |
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