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The Smell Of Death
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:24:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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This me
Who i am
A freak
A walking freakshow
Made fun of by all who see me
Look into my eyes
Can you see the pain
The hurt you create
That burns into my mind
I will get my revenge
Just a regular day at school for you
But to me its another day in hell
Float past the lockers
Crawl into my hole to hide
To get away from your taunts
Not today
Today is my day
I get to pay you all back for all of your hurt
Pull the gun out of my jean pocket
Fire it at will
Random shots in each direction
Bodies crumpling to the floor
Blood smeard across the lockers
You all scream in horror
I smile
Now that my work is done
What do i do now
I put the gun to my head
Hand on the trigger
Dead
This was for all that you have done to me
For all the pain you caused
I came back and took up my revenge
Pulled the trigger
The smell of death
The smell i craved
I waited this long
To finnally let it overcome me
That sweet sweet smell
Of a final breath
Dead today
Dead tomorow
I paid my dept to society
No more hurt no more no more
Nevermore
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-05-29 08:24:14]
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Re: The Smell Of Death
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by pixie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:08:51 AM AEST
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Wow,...... very very powerful words you have expressed in this poem,
Brilliantly written,
Pixie xx |
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Re: The Smell Of Death
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:55:52 PM AEST
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| I wrote something kinda like this once. Nice job. I like the smell of death, blood, and decay too! yum. Good write. |
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Re: The Smell Of Death
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by movax on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:47:40 AM AEST
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| Strong emotions. Excellent |
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Re: The Smell Of Death
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by MrMojoRisin on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:08:16 PM AEST
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| Wow, such a good read. Sometimes i feel maybe a little similar ;). But only in words. I truly enjoyed this one, Keep on truckin. |
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