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High Rise Lonely Skies
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 12:47:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The monster it towered above me, sky high
It's eyes shone through the gloom
I felt so scared, I would surely die
This was total doom
It did not move, but held such power
Beneath it, I stood transfixed
My only thought, was to run for cover
And what it would do next
I moved only an inch and the monster it grinned
Suddenly I was swallowed whole
It forced me along, not knowing what I'd find
I was in darkness, scurrying like a mole
Going upwards, I was in its throat
Until suddenly I was spat out
I was in a passage, I felt so remote
What was round the corner, I had no doubt
I landed in its belly and I could see through
To the outside world and you and you
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-05-29 12:47:48]
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Re: High Rise Lonely Skies
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by arden on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:48:21 PM AEST
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very interesting write.
made me think. i liked it.
nicely done.
keep em coming.
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