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How I Came to Stumble on The Way I Seem to Dote
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:23:22 PM in AEST
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At first I found him loutish, he rubbed me the wrong way.
But he remains my friend yet, up to this very day.
We once fought evry minute, evry chance we came upon.
Hed say, Youre stupid, Chelsea. Id retort, I hate you, Jon.
And yet, however strange it is, were still two real close friends.
Weve been there through the thick, the thin, and all the rivers bends.
We talk of God and angels, of singing, plays and dreams.
I could talk to him foreverat least thats how it seems.
An actor and a singer, a writer and a clown;
Hes got so much to offer and Im glad that hes around.
Weve shared our thoughts on music and how it makes us whole.
Weve shared our aspirations to meet God wholl free our souls.
Weve talked about what we will do after we graduate,
But I havent shared my fear that we shall then abate.
A playful loving hater is so far a lasting friend.
Ive been looking at him lately in hopes well never end.
Its not like I like him that wayhes just not quite my type.
I cannot stand his shallow ways. Its true, I always gripe.
Besides, Im really close to him and wouldnt that be weird?
Hes not like one that I could datemore like a friend revered.
One day Ill have to tell him of this silly poem I wrote
And how I came to stumble on the way I seem to dote.
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Re: How I Came to Stumble on The Way I Seem to Dote
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:37:24 PM AEST
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cool poem... maybe ya need to drop him a few more hints... guys are slow sometimes...lol
thanks for sharing... I enjoyed. |
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Re: How I Came to Stumble on The Way I Seem to Dote
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by bttrflynajar on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:52:32 PM AEST
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nice one chelsea, i love the ending
One day I’ll have to tell him of this silly poem I wrote
And how I came to stumble on the way I seem to dote.
and i also love the way you bring you readers closer to the friendship between you and jon, telling them of the things you talk about.
very nice
~bttrFlY~
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Re: How I Came to Stumble on The Way I Seem to Dote
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:51:35 PM AEST
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This brought a smile to my face. Very nice! Refreshingly honest and personal. And you have a wonderful eloquence with words.
Well done!
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Re: How I Came to Stumble on The Way I Seem to Dote
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by bernard on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:42:28 PM AEST
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Great Poem Chelsea, I enjoyed the read.
bernard |
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Re: How I Came to Stumble on The Way I Seem to Dote
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by Archie on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:28:16 PM AEST
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| Thanks for submitting such a wonderful poem I hope the two of you remain friends for a very long time. |
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