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The Little Boy and the Mushroom
Contributed by
Elena
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 04:57:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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A little boy in the forest
Sits, alone in the world,
The first time he ever held
A mushroom in his hand.
Of wet leaves and pepper it smells
And feels like washed-out velvet.
Yielding silently into powdery fibre,
It captures every teardrop
As his Dads ochre suitcase
Half-full and open on the bed
Finds its way back into his mind
And he dies of old age at 7.
A powdery fibre yielding silently
In anothers hand.
Copyright ©
Elena
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2004-05-29 16:57:19]
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Re: The Little Boy and the Mushroom
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 05:00:11 PM AEST
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I thought this was written perfectly, its short but captures alot of emotion
Thanks for sharing
Take care
Sam |
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Re: The Little Boy and the Mushroom
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by Zaf_Stud on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 05:23:02 PM AEST
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Chef de oeuvre!
Tour de force!
It's magnificent piece of hinting art in poetry....
Keep up with such work.......
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Re: The Little Boy and the Mushroom
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by matingcrow on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 05:24:05 PM AEST
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| Velvety on the pallet. The meaning of words, poisonous tears of memories past over my cheeks. |
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Re: The Little Boy and the Mushroom
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by Juliet on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:15:09 PM AEST
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| Wow, beautiful. I love "And he dies of old age at 7". |
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