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cycle
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:23:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In a circle
I bleed for the moon
It weakens me physically,
Reducing me to next-to-nothing.
But my creativity is amplified
A torrent of loud, expressive, passionate thought flows from nowhere.
It makes me powerful, it makes me real.
Through endurance, I am rewarded
My pencil never stutters...
It streams obedient because it recognises
I am another of the silvery goddesses
And in turn, I stream obediently
In the glittery white light of my master.
In dead night I am alive,
Whispering gratitude
For the soft illumination of my pages
I fill them with ease,
Explaining away my insensitive behaviour
During the hours of harsh sunlight.
Clarity, peace and understanding dawn on my form
At every sunset
The cool, pure waves gently reflect my starry sisters as we bathe in the calm serenity
Beamed from our moon.
It's not so bad being a lunatic...
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dolly_dagger
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2004-05-29 18:23:37]
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Re: cycle
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:30:33 PM AEST
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| Very interesting write |
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Re: cycle
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:30:36 PM AEST
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| Very interesting write |
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Re: cycle
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:55:14 AM AEST
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The first poem I've seen written about uh, 'women's stuff' and the like - lol - its very well written (coming from your good self), and I appreciate the overall cosmic allegiance to your (as a woman) poetic nature, and the way you portray it.
Keep writing. Well done, as ever! |
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Re: cycle
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 04:59:23 AM AEST
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| as ever ellie you make me sit here and think wow that is excellent. it seems it does not matter the subject of your poem it always come out great. then again you are indeed one of the greatest people i know and have the pleasure of knowing. keep writing!! |
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