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A Bum…
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:49:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Found my way down the street
The sun was burnn bright!
All this walking is getting me tired
I need a place to stay
To kick back and fall asleep
Hey and a couple of drinks too
cause Im thirsty off the wall
Also some food would be nice
I havent eaten in days!
The days used to go by so fast
Now their so dull and sluggish
No cash to spend
I need a job
Some new clothes
A place to stay
Some food to grub on
Liquids to quench my thirst
Where did my life go?
It used to be so easy
Everything passed by as a dream
So quick and exciting
Now its so hard
I need to get on my feet and start off new
To become successful once again
Pick myself off of the ground
And conquer what needs to be done.
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pyrofungus
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2004-05-29 18:49:30]
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Re: A Bum…
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by matingcrow on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 07:01:38 PM AEST
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| Are they truly free. Keep yourself so romantic. Do not ever lift your head out from beneath the comfort of your covers. |
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Re: A Bum…
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by Blest474 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:16:01 AM AEST
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I love that poem it kinda sounded like you actually got into a bums head. brilliant,
dont ever lose that creative spark you have,
you could be my inspiration maybe |
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Re: A Bum…
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:26:10 AM AEST
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Very nice poem! Great imagery and it gives a deep insight in the life of those without shelter. It would match my 'Hobo's Song' very well, as you stated.
5 stars for you... I really did not understand why someone granted you only 2 stars for this...
Greetz,
Hur |
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