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The best thing to never happen...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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your riddles bring question
from questions come answers
your answers bring anger
and I am its dancer
and while I am spinning
I become dizzy
to dizzy to see
that you are to busy
to busy to stop
and take a step back
to get off your feet
take time to relax
to relax would mean
you need to stop going
and if you stop going
your world would quit flowing
and if it quit flowing
you think youll expire
and that your body
would be tossed in the fire
the fire would burn
and you would be charred
your soul would be free
no longer scarred
just take a step back
and see what you do
know why you do it
and feel like you do
after the fact
you will still see
the person right there
for you is me...
I dont pass the judgement
I dont say those thngs
I dont cause the pain
or the hate that it brings
I stay by your side
I hold your hand
I help through struggles
I help you to stand...
I fight for your honor
I'lll do it all the same
I've know you all my life
some days I barely know your name
you pass up the good one
and run to the bad
to busy running
to see what you have
yet you go with flow
running to fast
afraid that life
is going to pass
so you never look back
cant bring yourself to
see the best thing
that never happened to you....
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holderofthestone
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2004-05-29 20:45:00]
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Re: The best thing to never happen...
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:46:28 PM AEST
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| posted under wrong topic sorry |
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Re: The best thing to never happen...
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:49:16 PM AEST
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| great great write!!!! that was amazing...it flowed so well....and had great meaning as well.. i hope it works out and whoever your talking about takes time to stop or at least slow down as your suggesting...so maybe she can realize the wonderful person she has. you have a great talent. |
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Re: The best thing to never happen...
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by arden on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:51:26 PM AEST
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this was awesome!
i just love how it written. so different and just amazing.
perfectly done.
love this.
Arden |
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Re: The best thing to never happen...
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:12:02 PM AEST
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excellent piece. you ought to give this to the object of your affection, perhaps it'll cause a moment of reflection for the better.
thanks for sharing. |
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Re: The best thing to never happen...
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:42:29 AM AEST
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wow, flowed just amazingly...I loved it...jeep it up great work, as always...
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo |
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