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Fantasy
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:06:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ripped back to actuality My serene dream fades from memory A glimpse into a life once lived A peaceful harmony never to be found again
An orange globe crawls slowly across the horizon Bathing the trees in light, warming rolling hills Gentle wind kisses stone on the great wall Mist slowly lifts above the castles highest window
Tin whistle sings Beltanes promise of light I wait for you by the tree Clouds gather in the west, waiting Peace flows through my veins and the tree
Ripped again into waking Another day my heart is broken I waited then, Ill wait now Until I melt into peaceful delusion
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2004-05-30 08:06:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fantasy
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:32:54 AM AEST (User
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yes, we're are all the same...different in so many ways and yet, wanting our own peace. A really lovely write.
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Re: Fantasy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lone_er on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:36:32 AM AEST (User
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I really like the way you write of love. With the resignation that at least with you, it will remain..Refreshing and I enjoyed it very much...Russ |
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Re: Fantasy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:21:33 PM AEST (User
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This is lovely. I have to look for more of your work. I am very impressed.
Rita |
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