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Endless
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:13:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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do you know how it feels
to be ridiculed each and every day
afraid of the world outside and beyond
falling down an endless pit of hell
as you fall you are scratched and burned
past toughts and feeling ripping at your skin
ripping at your lifeless body
pulling aprt your memories
slowly disecting your toughts
bringing up your long gone past
tearing up all hurt put inside your brittle mind
your dead soul trapped in an endless hole
clawing at the walls as the close in on you
screaming with pain and anguish
howling with fury at those who hurt you
the ones who killed you each passing day
but is it all real as you wake in your bed
dripping with sweat and bleeding
no one to comfort you to let you cry it all out
get up and pound on these walls
these white wall that keep you from humanity
they thought of you as an untamed beast
put you in here as not to hurt any one else
only there to hurt yourself
sliced wrist and gushing wounds of your skin
crying and screaming for them to set you free
they cant here you its just another day for them
they can only here the muffled pain comeing from the inhabitants
the ones who they have captured and wasted
taken prisoner into themselves
turn against all human beings
against they're own minds
this is how we die here in hell
kept inside for eternity tearing free
broken down bit by bit inside
pulling our bodies inside out
falling endlessly into a tunnel of dispear
caught in this replayed motion of self mutalation
this is what happens each day to me
untill i will expire into an ocean of blood and tears
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-05-30 09:13:56]
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Re: Endless
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:16:51 AM AEST
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wow, to call this powerful and raw is an understatement, trully great work,
pixie xx |
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Re: Endless
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:35:25 AM AEST
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| This is incredibly powerful and rich in its imagery. There were many, many lines that really moved me. Extremely well written. Thanks so much for sharing this... it truly has had an impact. |
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Re: Endless
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:42:21 AM AEST
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very powerful. a great, emotionally powerful poem,
great work, phil xxx |
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