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not simple enough 31.05.04
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:23:59 AM in AEST
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right now..darkness seems the most comforting place
lillies bend, soft white dust spreads
your hands reach for my dazed fingertips
frozen in the shape of fast black bends,
weaving through time
suspended beyond your view,
commanding the field, leading myself to certain death.
i feel no remorse
in me.
how is it
that i have a conscience
but no heart.
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Re: not simple enough 31.05.04
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:34:58 PM AEST
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Quite well written . . . poignant, powerful, and fantastic imagery. Nice job.
And you are by no means alone in how you feel.
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