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Listen To Y our Child
Contributed by
freespirit
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:36:47 AM in AEST
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Listen to you child
Have you ever stopped to listen? To what your child has to say? Or are you always just to busy Thats why they run away They go in search of friendship Where some one takes the time To listen to there inner thoughts And what is on their minds What if the path they travel? Is the path to drugs and death? Will you then have the time to listen? When you lay them within the earth to rest So why not take the time From your oh so busy day And sit and listen as to What your child would like to say WRITTEN BY Dorothy Elaine Calvert Copyrights
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2004-05-30 10:36:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Listen To Y our Child
(User Rating: 1 ) by matingcrow on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:43:32 AM AEST (User
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Great! Don't be affraid to rewrite. This is a good and honest poem. Fill your day with joy and wonder. Fill your night with peace and slumber. |
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Re: Listen To Y our Child
(User Rating: 1 ) by shanarah on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:37:00 PM AEST (User
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There is alot of truth in your write. thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Listen To Y our Child
(User Rating: 1 ) by dragon on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:41:52 PM AEST (User
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Your peom says the truth, as a teenager who's parents are real busy and never use to listen to my sister and I much, we are now having problems with my sister and her going to drugs and making back choices,so I can say its the truth
Thanks for sharing this wonder poem
dragon |
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