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The Shore Line
Contributed by
freespirit
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:40:26 AM in AEST
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THE SHORE LINE
As I walk along the shore line
My bare feet in the sand
I long to see my sister
And take her by her hand
We may walk along in silence
For no words wed have to say
And cherish every moment
As we walked along our way
We may talk about our childhood
The laughter and the fun
The joys that we both shared
When we where very young
Wed pause in breathless wonder
Of the beauty all around
And listen to that music
And the sounds from far beyond
So when Im felling lonely
Ill know just what Ill do
Ill take a walk along that shore
That takes me back to you
Written by
Dorothy Elaine Calvert
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Re: The Shore Line
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by Zaf_Stud on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:56:24 PM AEST
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That's a pretty write!
It speaks of the beauty of nature as well as the happy memories that associate with it...
Well done Elaine :)
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Re: The Shore Line
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:03:20 PM AEST
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this is beautifully done:) hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: The Shore Line
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:50:37 PM AEST
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| I really liked the how the memories envoked really conveyed the love for the sister. Very well done piece. |
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Re: The Shore Line
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 06:53:36 AM AEST
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Freespirit
I found this to be a beautiful poem and a nice tribute to nature God and your sister. I am hopeful that she is still with you--if not dear one Take that lovely walk.
I want to read all of your poetry,but must comment on others now.
Your friend
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