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Given Half A Chance
Contributed by
parkman
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:36:38 PM in AEST
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Given Half A Chance
Why do you look at me, like Im scum of the earth
When I walk down the street, you take a wide berth
Am I so ghastly, such a hideous sight
Would it be better, if I came out at night
Its not my fault, I was born this way
Disfigured at birth and being made to pay
Tumours on my head, a hump on my back
You look at me afraid, that I might attack
Im not vicious, grudges I dont bare
I have a good heart, feelings, I care
Give me a chance, Im sure youd like me
Given half a chance, a good friend I could be
My life wont be long, but, loneliness kills too
Im not asking for pity, a simple hello would do
Maybe a natter, my mind is intact
I'm as perfect as you and that's a fact
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parkman
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2004-05-30 14:36:38]
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Re: Given Half A Chance
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by Archie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:18:13 PM AEST
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You prove that you are that by your words.
People who judge a book by its cover miss out on its contents. |
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Re: Given Half A Chance
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:19:11 PM AEST
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This was a very well written work. Great flow and rhymes made it a pleasure to read. Add a great message and you have a work of art.
Very well done
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