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The Fallen
Contributed by
Shadow
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:04:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The embers of fires raged on high
Scorching and burning beneath the sky
The ruins fall in embers deep
Amongst the angles damned to sleep
Swords of rust and eyes of gray
Upon the stone and ash they lay
Wings now scorched and eyes marked slain
Faces frozen in eternal pain
Slumbering deeply on a cloudless sky
Yet seeing and hearing damned to lie
In a sleepless slumber helpless and frail
Laying on the field now white and pale
Tears of god frozen to snow
Slowly the harsh wind begins to blow
No markers place the dead
Not a word of peace is said
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2004-05-30 21:04:49]
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Re: The Fallen
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by TheVoice on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:26:10 PM AEST
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Awesome write! What more can I say?
The Voice
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Re: The Fallen
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by secretwind on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 12:01:58 AM AEST
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| excellent...... |
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Re: The Fallen
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by Saitou-sama on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:43:18 PM AEST
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| I'm speechless. Wow. |
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Re: The Fallen
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 03:54:06 AM AEST
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| Brilliant write ... chilling ... so well written ... Jan |
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