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The Single Tear
Contributed by
Black13
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:29:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You needed to listen to me
because you always left me
frightened and alone with myself.
Now you're asking for me to care,
but I won't go where you want me to.
I'm so done breathing for you.
I had sworn that I would be there for you.
But still you tried to break me.
You would never admit how wrong you were.
So many words you spoke were lies.
It's all so funny now that you're gone.
My world had to move on.
I'd thrown out every note and picture.
I didn't want to see your smile behind my eyes
and I even threw out the rose you gave me.
It was the first time I'd ever felt lonely
so I wrapped myself in blankets
and hugged my pillows tightly.
Now I can't remember your face...
I'm hoping you're forgetting mine too...
The single tear that I cried for us...
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Black13
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2004-05-30 21:29:58]
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Re: The Single Tear
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:38:43 PM AEST
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So sad, Black..hope all is well.....
Jenni |
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Re: The Single Tear
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:40:22 PM AEST
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heartbreaking... another beautiful poem my friend. I hope all is well.
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Re: The Single Tear
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:17:21 PM AEST
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Very poignant. Especially the last two stanzas.
Seems like the simplest things we want in this world are the ones we don't get.
Take care, and hang in there.
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Re: The Single Tear
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by bttrflynajar on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:33:05 PM AEST
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nice thoughts, describes how we feel when something like happens, may i suggest a little more rythum?
~bttrFlY~ |
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Re: The Single Tear
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by dragon on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:20:05 PM AEST
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Sad but beautiful at the same time. I like how you decribed what we were going through well done
dragon |
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Re: The Single Tear
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by venkat on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 05:17:57 AM AEST
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| So sad...well written. venkat |
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Re: The Single Tear
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:16:24 AM AEST
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awww, jeff.. *hugs*
are you ok?
(stupid question phil)
this is so sad. brought tears to my eyes.
hang in there my friend.
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: The Single Tear
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:47:02 AM AEST
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Man, this one hit home with me. Try not to be bitter though. I have learned that only makes things worse.
Barkeeper, a round for my friend
Larry |
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Re: The Single Tear
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:23:37 AM AEST
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Stitch |
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Re: The Single Tear
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 03:41:33 PM AEST
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| wow...this is so incredibly amazing powerful, its so beatiful and sublime, wow |
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Re: The Single Tear
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by fastpitchqt on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:11:17 PM AEST
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| amazing poem! I have been through this and still am. Never realize what you had until its gone and even then sometimes you cant help but want it back no matter how much you've been hurt. Nicely expressed! |
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