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Light
Contributed by
PsychoScissors
on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:03:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The flashing light sits on the shelf,
next to me I see it shine,
it shines brighter then myself.
Isnt that a lovely story?
Today I was told I didnt care,
funny because I thought I did,
I guess it doesnt matter here.
It doesnt matter anywhere.
This morning I woke up to the birds,
chirping like they always do,
but I cant make out their words.
Doesnt that just make you think?
Someday youll finally see the place,
that you still have yet to find,
But it will all go to waste.
but Im sure the sun will shine.
Yes,
I'm sure the sun will shine.
Copyright ©
PsychoScissors
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2004-05-30 23:03:40]
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Re: Light
(User Rating: 1 )
by rightwingbrknwing on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:54:04 PM AEST
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| I dont quite know how to say how i feel about this but i'll make a sad attempt: beautifly sad optomism if such a thing exists, i dont know how to describe this poem, because since words are abused I mean that this is beautifly dark in the most pure and untanted sence of the words...it's going to drive me ***** crazy trying to say what i mean so forget it: wonderful. |
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