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First Love
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:18:56 PM in AEST
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It was so simple then
Our hearts were laid bare
The future was uncluttered
And life seemed fair
Magic then existed
In wonderful simplicity
We leapt into the unknown
Not knowing hesitancy
Holding one another
But only - by the hand
Playing in the blue moonlight
We could barely stand
We knew whispers
But not yet how to scream
We simply gazed at one other
Daring so to dream
Promising forever
Before our youth had gone
Wanting for so very little and
Wishing ever on
As time rolled by
We fell victim to our age
Learning fear and impatience
Simple was upstaged
We held on tight
Against the nameless force
But eventually we had to give in
Heavy with remorse
It had been perfect
The way it truly ought to be
And never will I forgive time
For taking it from me
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Re: First Love
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:39:32 PM AEST
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Lovely!! We are all victims.....
Jenni |
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Re: First Love
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 02:23:38 AM AEST
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| if you always remember the good times it never truly escapes you. And someone I hold dear told me its better to aleast have known love... great poem. |
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Re: First Love
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:09:28 AM AEST
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i know this all to well....time can be so cruel.great poem..shows an emotion many face each day and some have yet to endure.
luv always |
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Re: First Love
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by carmen_queasy on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 11:38:01 AM AEST
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| ouch, thats powerful and emotive. |
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Re: First Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:17:25 AM AEST
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Very poignant. What a grievous thing first love can be! Yet so bright.
Excellent piece.
Andrew |
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Re: First Love
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:27:42 PM AEST
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Losing your first love is the worst feeling in the world. I havent really lost him yet, as we have never actually been together, but he is my best friend and I am head over heels. And it still hurts everyday. I hope the would heals and you are no longer a victim of that first love. You wrote about it wonderfully. Well done.
Lindsey |
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Re: First Love
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:09:45 PM AEST
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beautifully sad, a bittersweet poem, great images and flow, the way you show life and love is excellent here, i can't say enough about it, its a gorgeous write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: First Love
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by poetryman30 on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:28:33 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful piece...our first love, innocent and pure, will always haunt us. We wonder what might have been. Sometimes, we are allowed by fate to re-connect with that love and discover it is still as strong as it was then.
When fate smiles, there is little that can stand in its way.
Hopefully, you will find your way back to the simpler time and to that first love...and everything will be just right...
PM30...been there... |
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