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Home Made Abortions
Contributed by
Vermillion
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:13:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Home Made Abortions
in this night, a horrid fright, a young child swallowed by jeepers creepers see my mother, like no other, she was strapped to a vacuum cleaner
abort the child, wicked and vile, the storm clouds fill the night sky say your prayers, standing there, tonight a baby's gonna die
benediction, born addicted, to crystal meth and crack cocaine see the blood, my only son, in the backyard we dig a shallow grave
screams aloud, standing proud, father, did you take joy in this victimize? wheres my god, the souls he robbed, where do fetuses go when they die?
justify, or legalize, our swollen headed embryo slowly dies many years, its still so clear, a premature skeleton washes up under the night skies
its so haunting, and ever so taunting, do you blame me for your abomination? pass the bill, for little kills, put up in front of a group of murderers for a nomination
look into my eyes, dont you lie, and tell me satan isnt well and alive black and white, a horrid fright, truly hell has visited this house tonight.
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Re: Home Made Abortions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:25:00 AM AEST (User
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Whoa! You have conviction I must tell you that. You spoke volumes so I will keep my words on this subject brief. |
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Re: Home Made Abortions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dralion on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:53:29 AM AEST (User
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Expect a poetic reply soon
NARAL [www.naral.org] |
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Re: Home Made Abortions
(User Rating: 1 ) by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:27:11 AM AEST (User
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Very confronting. you have a conviction, and boy do you voice it well! Bearing in mind the sad subject matter, I enjoyed reading this poem, and is one that will not be easily forgotten |
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Re: Home Made Abortions
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 06:36:16 PM AEST (User
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awesome poem... I loved this and agree with you totally. Kudos to you for standing by your beliefs and writing this confrontational poem we need more people like you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Home Made Abortions
(User Rating: 1 ) by brigitte7735 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:13:23 AM AEST (User
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Gotta love a controsersy, its good to get people all riled up now and again. *Cheers*
Vanessa |
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Re: Home Made Abortions
(User Rating: 1 ) by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:14:09 PM AEST (User
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u r a very talented writer. although ur stuff that i have read is very creepy u write some of the best poetry i have ever read. keep up the good work, ur doing a great job!
~allyson~ |
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Re: Home Made Abortions
(User Rating: 1 ) by HellsLibrarian on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:46:25 AM AEST (User
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well, that's one that'll stick in you mind for a while. |
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Re: Home Made Abortions
(User Rating: 1 ) by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:21:46 PM AEST (User
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wow, that's a terrible way to abort, but you wrote fantastically as usual. |
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