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Without so much as...
Contributed by
reilt
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 09:57:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've been sitting with this stunning silence
For hours now
Until it becomes ours
And for the darkness
We are never more like strangers
Time not setting us apart
Just closer together
Until the moon and stars
Become a distant memory
And everything else ceases to exist
But the fullness of your mouth
Calling to me
Naming me your's
Without so much as
A word.
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reilt
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2004-05-31 09:57:55]
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Re: Without so much as...
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by Stitch on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:14:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful! You don't need that apostrophe on the last yours, but otherwise, it's perfect!
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Re: Without so much as...
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:00:13 AM AEST
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