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The Scroll in the Sky
Contributed by
Archie
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 02:31:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I looked outside my window in wonder to behold a scroll that stretched across the sky. wrapped in what seemed like velvet made from what seemed like gold All the people stared on mystified.
Newsmen came and took their pictures Reporters came to town to spy. Stores began to sell their souviniers of the greatest wonder they've seen in their lives.
People came from around the globe just so they might see the scroll that stretched across the sky Scientists stood in wonder not wanting to believe this sight has come before their eyes.
Historians tried hard to read the writing, archeologists to get a glimpse inside gossips began to spread some rumors "The aliens are coming they did testify"
After a month no answers came about the scroll stretched across the sky. Not even planetologists could speculate of what had boggled their minds.
One fateful morn all on its own the scroll opened, it was terrible darkness fell upon the world all the people could do was tremble the earth was torn in two asunder in a thunderous shuddering break exploding in a blinding light no one escaped their fate.
I awoke from my dream with a frightened sigh I walked over to my window I drew the shade and I peeked out my breath still heavy and labored and what should I see up in the sky hovering far over me than the very same scroll that destroyed the world. The same scroll that I had dreamed.
Up from my dream I hopped nearly falling from my bed. Not sure if I was still dreaming I peaked out of the shade The stars shone brightly in the night just as they've always done wearily I returned to sleep my nightmare was finally done.
I've never had a more convincing dream than the one I dreamed that night when the world fell in calamity by the scroll of power and might.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-05-31 14:31:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Scroll in the Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:03:33 PM AEST (User
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awesomely powerful dream
great poem
shari |
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Re: The Scroll in the Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:10:49 PM AEST (User
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Cool. That was a neat one, Archie. I liked it.
Lots of love,
Chelsea |
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Re: The Scroll in the Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:47:08 PM AEST (User
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excellent piece.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: The Scroll in the Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:25:11 PM AEST (User
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Very vivid dream. You tell it so well.
I too had a dream about a scrool in the sky running backwards. It was written in Hebrew but it was there teaching me things I needed to know. Even tho I couldn't read it I knew that when the time came I'd understand.
The scroll was playing the Hebrew language like a t.v. it was constenly moving backwards-n-side ways.
Very good writing.
Luv, huggs,
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Re: The Scroll in the Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:19:37 PM AEST (User
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There is a great deal to this piece. Wholly poetic and excellent. Keep it up!
Andrew
Ah, yes... 1985... the year I was born. Must've been the reason. |
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Re: The Scroll in the Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by freespirit on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:50:46 AM AEST (User
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Love this one great job
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Re: The Scroll in the Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by RobertKilpatrick on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:53:59 AM AEST (User
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was this a dream or was this real?
Good read...
Cheers Robert |
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