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Outsider
Contributed by
cheech
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:22:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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burning up with so much anger
am i in terrible danger,i feel like
a stranger to my own neice
no one realizes me,no one ever
looks me right in the eyes,i've
heard too many lies,why won't
i just die,i feel like i'm on trial
everyone has a smile on their face
trying hard to erase all the pain,but
theres just too much to deal with
no one knows what i feel,i feel
like an outsider,outsider,all alone
in the world,outside,outsider
everyone tries to deny me,everyone
lies,and i know it,i need to go,get out
of here,i wanna go up there,it don't
matter if i end up down there,i just
don't wanna be here all alone
i need somone to come along
and tell me where i belong
this life is just too long,i feel
like i've already left with no one
realizing where i went not even
caring
outsider
outsider
ousider
trying hard to erase all the pain,but
theres just too much to deal with
no one knows what i feel,i feel
like an outsider,outsider,all alone
in the world,outside,outsider
life is tough enough,theres just too
much rough playing,i love one
person,he loves me and hes the
only one that seems to care,its
not fare but atleast its a mutual thing
outsider
outsider
playing in this crazy place,i'll never
forget that one face,is life a race?
it don't matter what i do,you always
have something to say that will bring
me down,and my father is never around
trying hard to erase all the pain,but
theres just too much to deal with
no one knows what i feel,i feel
like an outsider,outsider,all alone
in the world,outside,outsider
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2004-05-31 16:22:59]
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Re: Outsider
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by reilt on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:33:42 PM AEST
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| i can sense your anger and your pain. this is a very powerful poem...full of raw emotion and hurt...it really affected me. i thougt the repetition was very effective as it really brought home how sad and frustrated( i'm not sure if that's the right word to use) and angry you feel about the situation. i think in some ways for whatever reason we all feel like outsiders. i know i do so i can empathise. i thought this was a remarkable peace of writing and i hope one day that you won't feel like you are on the outside and that you find where you belong...love and happiness to you* |
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Re: Outsider
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:34:36 PM AEST
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I think we can all relate to this write one time or the other.
If you've found that special then u r very fortunate.
good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Outsider
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by Luinil on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:31:06 PM AEST
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| the repetition conveys a lot of emotion and frustration here... you did a great job |
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Re: Outsider
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:07:26 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very emotional. |
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