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Blue
Contributed by
danimus
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 06:19:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Commit me silence
I'm feeling no connection
And you prevent
My full potential
Convince me violence
To not be that way
By every means in my expense
To die today
Surrender my love
Love that was here
But it is now blood
And theres no more to bare
Drain my nerves
So I can sleep
For the third
One that I leap over
And I thought it was all a dream
One to remain in
But It is my hell and never,
Felt like the real thing
What went wrong?
In a game of chess
I was the pond
But you were clueless
To my use
And now I'm completely blue
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danimus
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2004-05-31 18:19:34]
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Re: Blue
(User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:46:12 PM AEST
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| i love the flow of this poem... great job |
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