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what you do to me
Contributed by
Alliyah
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 09:35:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You told me you loved me but it was all lies
Everytime you call me I start to cry
Even my heart dies
The pain hurts deep inside
Now your love is like a hundred knifes
stabbing in every where...even my thys
Why do you do this ?
It hurts so much
what if someone did you the same way
Would you cry as much ?
I hate what you did
and thats the worst part
So the story is
you lied, cried, and wanted to die
I love you still but it seems you don't love me back
god this hurts sooo much !!!!!!! will you take me back ??
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Alliyah
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2004-05-31 21:35:45]
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Re: what you do to me
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by reprobate on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:34:03 AM AEST
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sounds self-destructive. if there is that much pain, i would want to be rid of the source. looking back all the time is such a hinderance to looking ahead. nice write, though.
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