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soldier happiness 01.06.04
Contributed by
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:22:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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a smile deeper than yours
knowing heartless
a mind clearer than yours
scared into clutching
a last hope for self worth
a deal with the devil
pride from midnight black
be my dark prophet
but i beg you, not forever
once burned knows the future
and the path
you can trust his scars
he is utterly lost without dreams
when dreams create the most pain
to imagine of wind kisses
and see those once loved smile
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Re: soldier happiness 01.06.04
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by Stoney1 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:22:10 AM AEST
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Well...I've read this over a few times, and I still can't make head nor tail of it. It's inchoate. You haven't provided enough for the reader to hang his hat on.
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