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Dreams
Contributed by
Rhei76
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:34:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm still searching
For what I always look
I hail you
For the time it took
I'm still an infant
In disguise
A child's mind
That plays for the rides
I'm not quite
What I was before
I'm not right
Severed flesh that tore
It's okay
We're all the same
Looking at the day
Hoping it will change
But like daisy chains
And the feeding trees
We breath the air
Therefor comes the dreams
Copyright ©
Rhei76
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2004-06-01 08:34:26]
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Re: Dreams
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by taintedmind on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:36:51 AM AEST
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| my heart tingled while reading that |
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Re: Dreams
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:38:22 AM AEST
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| i love the style and flow of this... great job! |
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Re: Dreams
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:44:52 AM AEST
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wonderfully written words,
trully great,
pixie xx |
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Re: Dreams
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:35:00 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this poem Rhei76. Keep up the good work.I love your unique style in your writing.-luckycharm. |
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