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The Rape of the Sun
Contributed by
Ina
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:12:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I walk up to the sun
(during its sunset period)
closer
until I am touching
its skin
and it is warm like a cats tummy
and fuzzy like an old blanket
I stroke it
with my fingertips
trace the moon
on the sun
I put my whole body
against the planet
dig my nails
into the skin
I tear holes
push my fist inside
ripping tearing ripping
the layers off the goddess
finally when
I shred
the curtain
to nothing
the sun
it is exposed
and underneath
I see
Gods Fetus
it looks up at me with
two worlds
and says:
poo poop pee doo
Copyright ©
Ina
... [
2004-06-01 12:12:25]
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Re: The Rape of the Sun
(User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:16:28 PM AEST
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| great poem...not sure i fully understand it all but i know i enjoyed it and I love your style* |
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Re: The Rape of the Sun
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:38:57 AM AEST
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now bounds for your erotic imagination.
looks great... venkat |
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