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Unforgiven
Contributed by
screwup
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:31:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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look out the window, see the bridge want to fall face is bleeding, battered, like a broken doll cant stand you and the things you do to me why do I deserve this cant you leave me be dont want you to touch me anymore no more brusies, no more lies no more anything to hide no more abuse no more nothing, no more use you dont care that I want to die cutting my wrists silently bleeding, into my last cry taking my last breath, as you pull me into my secret hell I die inside you are the hell to society and the hell that lives in me your overpowering body hovering over mine I can still feel your breath down my neck and the knife in my back, and you, holding me down like a tack I can still see the grin you gave as you got off me witout care and the pain I cannot bare your hellish face still haunts my very core thoughts of you, am I a whore? thoughts of me, it is all my fault with you and me, the sexual asaults what do I do, how do I move on I am so scared so much to come I just dont have the will anymore, no will to fight no self-esteem, no light I hate myself so much that I just cannot heal I hate myself so much that I just cannot deal
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Re: Unforgiven
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:38:18 PM AEST (User
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if this is real, find the closest abuse shelter and fly there. yesterday. if not, you deinitely made it come to life.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Unforgiven
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:40:54 PM AEST (User
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very poignant poem , gave me chills.. |
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Re: Unforgiven
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 03:19:10 PM AEST (User
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Deanna...
Yes... I do understand perfectly... my friend...
I like it ur poem... the way u have expressed ur feelings... I know it's not an easy thing to do... plz don't hesitate to ever call me or email me or pm if u want to talk... I'm here... my friend... for u always....
~Donna~
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Re: Unforgiven
(User Rating: 1 ) by eatfresh22 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:07:54 PM AEST (User
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Sickeningly honest poem. It's horrible how abuse can make us feel so horrible about ourselves. Amazing, touching poem.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Unforgiven
(User Rating: 1 ) by DirtyFool on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:22:09 PM AEST (User
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This poem is very heartwrenching. i am srry for what your going through. i hope everything turns out ok. but very good poem
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