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Life is Like a Candle
Contributed by
Colleen
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:16:44 PM in AEST
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The eternal flame glows radiantly
You're young and the world holds so many adventures
You grow a little older and the wax starts to melt
You've experianced some of the downs and ups of living
The wick grows short, and the flame starts to flicker
Like the flame, you're taking your last few breaths
You've experianced life and what it's all about however; experience has made you old
And then, with a gust of wind, the flame goes out
You've taken life step by step, and now you're done
Life is like a candle
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-06-01 16:16:44]
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Re: Life is Like a Candle
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:21:54 PM AEST
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This is an awesome write.. I love the analogy used... Keep them coming...
Jenni |
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Re: Life is Like a Candle
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:07:27 PM AEST
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| Very well done....Loved it...Russ |
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Re: Life is Like a Candle
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:24:16 PM AEST
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I agree w/ he others... awesome poem... loved it...
~Donna~ |
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