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Power
Contributed by
Sordida
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:46:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Rejection is a lonely word
hatred is as well
the exasperation of these words
makes my life hell
if only i had the power
i'd stop these words been said
but the only power that i have
is to stop myself insted
i feel my arm tingle
holding that sharp truth
enter it in my body
to show the only proof
the blood thats in my body
is spilt across the floor
shows that i am living
or that i was once before
but then that power leaves me
and i'm weakend from inside
now the only power that i have
is the ability to hide
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Sordida
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2004-06-01 19:46:30]
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Re: Power
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by creed on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:23:22 PM AEST
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I like this poem. the lines that jump out at me are
"the blood thats in my body
is spilt across the floor
shows that i am living
or that i was once before"
I like the way that you phrased this. Very interesting. |
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