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Pain
Contributed by
InexactExactness
on
Sunday, 13th October 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Is all the world to you a topic
something labeled to be remembered
Are all the people just a reminder
of each and every sinner
Why must you then face the world
in eyes of deceit and hate
The children trickle down the slopes
and coincide your fate
They receive the visions
of your evil temperate past
and they receive the silver lining
of the pain that you've amassed
Pain becomes the mirrored man
seen through eyes of gray
As death becomes your motive
with nothing less to say
Breathe here now and choke on yourself
your words aren't worth repeating
The future lies in the rest of us
and what we're truly seeking
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InexactExactness
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2002-10-13 09:00:00]
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Re: Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 08:21:36 PM AEST
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Breathe here now and choke on yourself...that is so deeply written the way you gave vision here in this poem is absolutely astonishing...i am honored to read your poetry of so many writings because it definately speaks to me, let your talent shine on my friend your words through your writings are very captivating to the soul....
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