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Ravenous
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:06:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The two children sit at the table
The mothers eyes always observing
Father sits, recites a work fable
All is anaesthetized by his droning
A subtle incomplete smile from lee
His sister nods, its time for supper
Oh what a surprise! Oh what a treat!
Shrieks the ecstatic mother loudly
Quietly the kids look down to their feet
Look what they made! she cried so proudly
A FEAST! cried Dad, hands in the air
The children anticipate despair
Plates are protruded from the kitchen
Smiles aplenty, a perfect dinner
Dad stared at the plate, is it chicken?
They stare back, neither a sinner
Those innocent faces filled with love
No one could ever suspect; no one
Suddenly father let out a yell
He chipped his tooth on an old gold ring
What is this, have you something to tell?
We wanted to make your favourite thing
Shocked dad looked at his plate, a finger
An eye, a toe, the sauce was too red
Mother stopped eating, she too stares down
What on earth did you two do he cried
Whats wrong dad, in unison
Dont you like grandma?
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alecfernadez
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2004-06-02 15:06:29]
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Re: Ravenous
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by youlied on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:07:57 PM AEST
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| This is very creepy....I like it. |
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Re: Ravenous
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:27:52 PM AEST
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Only a warped mind could find this enjoyable, so naturally I LOVED it :o)
Thanks for a much needed laugh my friend,
Larry |
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Re: Ravenous
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:38:34 PM AEST
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Ewwww....Gross.......lmao
(Told Ya!)
Jenni |
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Re: Ravenous
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:18:16 PM AEST
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That was pretty gross, but funny in a demented way. Very twisted you are!
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Ravenous
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:18:14 PM AEST
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Dark humour suits you Alec. Highly amusing, yet disturbingly enthralling . . . I like it.
Keep 'em coming. |
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Re: Ravenous
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by MDodgen on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:33:54 AM AEST
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| i love your dark humor, it makes my day. very cute poem also. good job yet again. |
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Re: Ravenous
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:08:54 PM AEST
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Haha, that was different
I like
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