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Dying
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:14:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here I am you found me
Where have you gone?
Come out, come out wherever you are
Wish upon my dying star
The game is over, show yourself
Where have you gotten to?
Please will you come back to me?
Climb upon my dying tree
Youre in the swing
To and fro, to and fro
Still I cant reach to you
To me you are beautiful
As I watch you while under this cover
You can be my dying lover
I dont like this game anymore
Im tired of looking for you
I dont know you anymore
Youre unrecognisable, youre ugly
I wish youd go away, I wish youd leave
Please dont leave me, please,
I miss you more than my heart can take
My mind and brain are far apart
Tear open and torture my dying heart
Ill die for anything, Ill die for love
But love wont die for me
I dont like this game anymore
You wont come out, you wont find me
Im waiting but you wont find me
I cant seem to find me
I'm lying here, I'm crying
You couldn't find me here, I'm dying
How long until Im dead?
How long until this game is over
Im dying
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2004-06-02 15:14:42]
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Re: Dying
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:17:28 PM AEST
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| this was brilliantly written, well done! I liked some of the word play as well, all together you created a very sad depressing atsmosphere and made something sad yet visually beatiful. Well done again |
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