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Unthought Of
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:06:15 PM in AEST
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My Daddy you said
You'd always be,
But now you're gone
Away from me.
You left me hurt,
Confused, upset,
Angry, sad,
Numb, depressed.
You don't care about
How I feel.
Your selfish heart is
Made of steel.
The choices you made,
Your sinful life,
Left me lonely,
Full of strife.
Now you have
The mistaken thought,
That I'd love you,
That the pain'd be forgot.
This must be
Some kind of joke.
Whatever did
These thoughts provoke?
Don't even think
For one short moment
I've put time aside
For your atonement.
Our relationship
Is torn to shreds.
Forgive you? Love you?
I'd rather be dead!
It's all your fault
Things are this way.
You broke my heart,
So now you'll pay.
Leave me alone!
Just let me be.
Time with you
Is the last thing I need!
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Re: Unthought Of
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:25:16 PM AEST
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Whoa! I'm certainly glad you are past this yourself, Carrie. Hopefully your sister will see as well. Yet this is only what they deserve when they do such things, then ignore the fact that they've hurt you.
Thank God we don't only get what we deserve. That is His nature of Love, and it is only with His help that we can do the same.
Well-written piece as well!
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Re: Unthought Of
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:26:20 PM AEST
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Pretty much the same way I feel about my biological "father" (or as I refer to him, the sperm donor) only I've got more resentment and I tend to look at him as immature and frivolous or careless. However I don't show any of it anymore. It's a waste--an added drama nobody needs. I guess, sometimes, bad things happen in order to create good families.
Good write, I'm sure your sister will come to deal with it in time.
Great poem.
Lots of love,
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Re: Unthought Of
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:21:36 PM AEST
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May she find the peace that you have.
Take care, Carrie.
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Re: Unthought Of
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:28:11 AM AEST
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It's sad and difficult when someone feels this way. Only God can use time to heal such wounds, as you must know.
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Re: Unthought Of
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:03:46 AM AEST
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very sad, beautifully expressed:) hugs n' love nessa
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