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Hostage
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:40:57 PM in AEST
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The guns to my head again
The blind fold over my eyes
Been in this situation,
many more times than I should
Blinded by an empty hope
Shielded from the piercing truth
Pain!
Un-escapable fate,
has made me a hostage again
Greed!
Promised the amaranth,
but turned to a hostage again
It snuck inside of my room
And burrowed inside my dreams
Darkened the most blissful dream
Turned the roses to demons
Pain!
Un-escapable fate,
has made me a hostage again
Greed!
Promised the amaranth,
but turned to a hostage again
Been turned to a hostage again...
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ThePumpkinKing
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2004-06-02 17:40:57]
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Re: Hostage
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by Colleen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:45:34 PM AEST
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| Wow, I really like this a lot. Great writting! |
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Re: Hostage
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:11:14 PM AEST
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And though we are aware of the likely impossibility, we succumb everytime. Human nature to continue to wait for miracles, I suppose.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Hostage
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by bernard on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:40:56 AM AEST
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| Very deep poem I had to read this twice before I grasped the full meaning. I like the idea of hostage something I would never have thought of for a poem. Full marks. |
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