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Faithless Playgrounds
Contributed by
CeruleanScreams
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:48:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A playground--
Desolate, dreary, dark,
No joyful youngsters to be found,
Overturned benches brutally stark.
A mangled swing shrieks
Tottering on rusted metal chains.
A refuge for crackheads, whores, he-she freaks,
Where little girls are repeatedly raped then slain.
Dead autumn leaves twirl in a winter bluster...
Memories of where I lost mine to that faithless *****.
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CeruleanScreams
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2004-06-02 17:48:46]
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Re: Faithless Playgrounds
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by nail-to-the-head on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:57:26 PM AEST
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wow! strong emotion in this poem! very heartfelt. well writen.
+ nail-to-the-head + |
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Re: Faithless Playgrounds
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by Shadow on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:57:33 PM AEST
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| This paints a perfectly morbid picture. i love it. I don't know if it's based on reality but if its not then all i can say is WOW! If it is all i can say is WOW and sorry. good wright. |
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Re: Faithless Playgrounds
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:44:45 PM AEST
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"I hope that a time will come real soon
when you can move on to something new
The past just hurts us it's very good at that
I you move on and heal from the bad"
Dark times happen to us, but they don't define us |
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