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Tears
Contributed by
Colleen
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:27:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My tears are my tides
Changing always and washing away hurt
They release all the terrible emotions I try so desperately to hide
Tears make me grow from my mind set of dirt
Sometimes I try to hide them
Plastering on my fake smile
My true light's dim
But it hurts to know that it's me in denial
Sometimes I'm scared to let people see
I put on my show
Their strong hero is me
Can I still help them if they know
It's sad they can't see what's going on
As I silently make a desperate plea
Oh how easily I can
Please let me be who I want to be
Tears please help me wash away my pain
Help them see I'm not always strong
Be my refreshing rain
Crying these tears is never wrong
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-06-02 18:27:55]
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:22:13 AM AEST
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| From beautiful to emotive, and all those superlatives inbetween.
Truly a great write - just look at these opening lines, readers!
"My tears are my tides
Changing always and washing away hurt"
That first stanza was so good, and was a perfect introduction to such a visual, poignant caress. I question the 23 before me who never commented . . . are you all blind?? Or just lazy?
Anyway - great write. Keep at it. |
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