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Rage
Contributed by
mdmorash
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:07:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Rage!
Its the only thing I feel.
It rips,
It tears,
It gouges me.
It takes its final meal.
Pain!
Its the payment for my sins.
It mocks,
It laughs,
It taunts at me.
It glares its evil grin.
Time!
It is always gone too fast.
It ticks,
It talks,
It runs away.
It comes and never lasts.
Death!
Its the ending to this play.
It glides,
It sleeps,
It sails away.
It leads to better ways.
Michael David Morash
Copyright 2003
Copyright ©
mdmorash
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2004-06-02 19:07:54]
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Re: Rage
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by Colleen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:33:20 PM AEST
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| I liked that a lot. I loved how you described the emotions, it was very cool to read. |
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Re: Rage
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:12:00 AM AEST
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Those were really interesting takes on each subject and the piece flows very nicely.
Keep writing. |
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