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Failure
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:23:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Alone I sit, eyes wide open,
cold and scared, my mind drifts,
sways to a place, warm and bright
filled with happiness and love,
SNAP! back again, reality,
dull and drab, damp, slow breath,
the slow, pounding, of my heart
beats against my ribs, shaking,
fingers twitch with anticipation,
heart beats faster, it will be over,
I see my table layed
bottles of drink - my posion
stashes of pills - my saviour
together they will complete me,
save me from myself,
I write down my last words,
you are reading now,
heart forgets to pump, miss a beat
I take them quick, followed by drink.
spaced out, my existance is bleack,
fading now, slowing down, time,
ticking, counting tocs,
eyes glazed, pupils big,
world turning grey,
my tourture is over,
life - complete,
a complete failure.
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Re: Failure
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:32:36 PM AEST
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dude this is so good. but its hella creepy. where u get these thoughts is beyond me but good poetry. keep it up.
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Re: Failure
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:54:32 PM AEST
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| intriguing poetry. |
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Re: Failure
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:13:11 PM AEST
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| Wow This Is Okay |
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Re: Failure
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by jaeann on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:43:39 PM AEST
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| you write as if the darkness has taken over........i know of that feeling...... |
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