|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
End of Feeling
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
End of Feeling
I will eliminate
I will obliterate
I will hate
I will create
My own devastation
My own elimination
I know it's true
I'm not too blind
To see what's before me
Truth is my enemy
These feelings risen
Drowned me in them
These feelings sink
I can breathe again
New feelings rise
To consume within
My elimination is my devastation
My devastation is my frustration
I can't obliterate the reason
I can obliterate the feeling
I eliminated
I obliterated
I hated
I created
This mistake
What has commenced has ended
Another chance to fall again
My own feelings eliminated
To save myself within
Copyright ©
essentially9
... [
2004-06-02 20:43:17]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: End of Feeling
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:48:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I liked the rather cacophonous flow of this. Very good poem and very honest. I liked the 2nd to last stanza the best. Once again a very good poem keep 'em coming.
Bobo (Joel) |
|
|
Re: End of Feeling
(User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:49:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nice!! great poem. I truly feel what your expressing here, very strong write. Enjoyable read. |
|
|
Re: End of Feeling
(User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:52:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Great job. I really liked this one. I especially like the line "Truth is my enemy." I can identify. Great poem. |
|
|
Re: End of Feeling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:58:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great job, this was really well written and it's something I can totally relate to. It reminds me of something the band Disturbed would write, which makes it all the more awesome! ;]
Katie |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
