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Beat Me
Contributed by
blackfire9786
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:15:31 PM in AEST
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Hit me
Beat me
Use me
Mentally abuse me
I know you love it
So go ahead
Im not stopping you
Just make sure Im dead
Before you finish your little temper tantrum
This time make sure Im gone
That way after this time
Ill never have to see another one.
I dont care anymore
The bruises no longer bother me
I wont cry anymore
Every time you beat me.
Throw me up against the wall
Tell me what a bad person I am
Hit me in the face one more time
Make fun of me for every time I ran
Im waiting for your yells and screams
Just waiting for you to have a few more beers
Go ahead, do what you want
Release all my hate, sadness, and fears.
Well I hope you had fun tonight
Ill see you tomorrow, same place and time.
Bring a few more beers to drink tomorrow
And I promise Ill tell everyone Im fine.
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Re: Beat Me
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:40:22 PM AEST
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I feel like this poem holds alot of pain. But then again I could be wrong. But there was a strong message in it. Please keep writing.
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~*Brit*~ |
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Re: Beat Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:55:08 AM AEST
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This seethes with hate. For whom, I'm not exactly sure, but it certainly is an emotive read, as a good write about domestic violence should be.
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Re: Beat Me
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:59:05 PM AEST
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this is really good. sad topic but good nun-the-less.i'm sorry if this has really happened to you and if u ever wanna talk i'm here to talk. hope everything turns out for the best.
~allyson~
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Re: Beat Me
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by jaeann on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:40:45 PM AEST
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| oh f***.......THAT evoked so many emotions.......memories........you hit the nail on the head.......and i promise i'll tell everyone i'm fine......... |
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