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Lightening Strike
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:35:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Strange how it seems to creep up
Tho youve watched it on the horizon
The darkened sky that settles above
That you cautiously keep your eyes on.
You feel it in the air
The current on the breeze
The tension that is mounting
The sound that makes you freeze.
Funny how it seems to blow on in
When you least expect it.
Youve been watching all this time
But didnt think it would really hit.
The storm erupts and the lightening strikes
You never know when, why or who
Till youre crying through the night
And you realise that it has hit you.
MW
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2004-06-03 01:35:21]
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Re: Lightening Strike
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:47:37 AM AEST
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| descriptive. captured great emotions. |
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Re: Lightening Strike
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:40:32 AM AEST
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Analogical and fulgurous.
Nicely written. |
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Re: Lightening Strike
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by Vermillion on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:45:39 AM AEST
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nice flow and brilliantly captive. keep em coming
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