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Little Girl Lost
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:36:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Everyone harbours an inner child,
But mine hasnt been seen in along, long while,
She was frightened away by all my trauma,
I wish that I at least could have warned her.
She knew nothing of hate and nothing of fear,
Her innocence was the only thing that loomed near,
But I lost her because of this horrible world,
It tainted and destroyed this angelic little girl.
What once was so perfect is now tainted,
She witnessed the awful picture that was painted,
It made her cry, she cried a river,
Made her convulse and her insides shiver.
No child should ever have to see,
Just how cruel and terrifying this life can be,
But she saw it in all its hope and glory,
Her fairytale life became a horror story.
Instead of sweets and candy,
She craved the likes of vodka and brandy,
The stories which she listened to of a night,
Were enough to fill even the adults full of fright.
Her head wasnt filled with fun and dreams,
But the sound of blood curdled screams,
She has shook hands with danger,
Laid with it inside a dark manger.
Its a shame that this little girl is now lost,
But she was consumed by a tirade of frost,
Never to be seen or heard of again,
Another poor and innocent soul destroyed by excruciating pain.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-03 10:36:38]
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by bernard on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:43:56 AM AEST
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You paint a very sad picture of a childhood lost. I wish I could say something wise to help you but alas I am not a very good counsellor.
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:58:23 AM AEST
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A great emotional write.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:59:58 PM AEST
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She's in there somewhere,
I see her between the lines.
Keep looking
and keep writing
nice job |
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by Vermillion on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:22:56 PM AEST
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brilliant....absolutly brilliant.your words send a assault of emotions like lightning bolts deep into my soul.everything about that poem was excellent.please keep writing.
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by Nightseer63 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:39:56 PM AEST
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When I read this, I saw myself. It's a darkness that tends to creep out when I write fanfic, but I've learned the child is never truly lost in us-they just know the game hide and seek better than adults.
Love &Light,
Nightseer63
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:56:12 AM AEST
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| i can relate. i had the most ***** up child hood. and im still just 14. P.M. me if ya wanna talk. |
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:26:45 AM AEST
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| wow ~truly amazing~ |
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:53:51 PM AEST
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| Damn Girl you sketch a great view. For me to fall into. Your words are greatly entertaining to me. God bless and peace to you. |
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Re: Little Girl Lost
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by deadbloodyrose on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:48:30 AM AEST
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| very touching poem.. creative as well.. nice job.. AMI JO |
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