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Sphere
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:07:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Bleeding inside the sphere - Revolving around a speck
Apathy is slipping - Feelings swell the neck
A web of flies all dead - Blood sucked and dried away
A spider in a corner - Breaking in decay
A touch is lost to reality - Pre-set imagination
An eye blinks softly - Wandering damnation
Reappear inside - The sphere holding firm
The dust's breath staggers - Losing to the burn
Black - Red
Thoughts - Close
Lost - Retreats
Hole - Shows
Statis in the sphere - Hollow is the sphere
No one lying near - Skies bleakly clear
I'm bleeding in the sphere - I'm revolving around a speck
My apathy is slipping - Feelings swell my neck
I'm losing to you all - The sphere feels small
I can't believe I'm losing - I swore I wouldn't fall
I'M LOST WITHOUT A CALL
I'M LOST WITHOUT A CALL
You all have nothing - And me least of all
Everything is dead - Or quickly getting there
I've given up on hoping - I can't seem to care
I'm falling in your window - I'm falling in your trap
Too bad you don't exist - Or I'd wake you from a nap
I can't believe i'm lying - I can't believe I believe
I can't see you there smiling - Cause theres nothing there to see
You won't disagree - You can't disagree
I'm the only one here - And I'm dying from the scene
I'M FALLING
I'M LOSING
I'M SCRAWLING
FROM BLEEDING
Bleeding inside the sphere
Revolving around a speck
Everythings not clear
Transparent fades the wreck
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2004-06-03 14:07:52]
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Re: Sphere
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by jaeann on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:33:19 PM AEST
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| transparent fades the wreck.........i love that...... |
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Re: Sphere
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 02:52:25 PM AEST
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| powerful. |
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Re: Sphere
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:33:20 AM AEST
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| Excellent choice of words here, it makes for a great read and evokes a lot of frustration in me for some reason. |
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Re: Sphere
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by secretwind on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:45:46 AM AEST
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Whoa,this flow is innervision deep....
wandering damnation,hmm,gives me chills drifting on this.
The Wind |
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