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I'll keep you safe from the storm
Contributed by
Ginemarie
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:14:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Leave and let me go You're not meant for me, I know Carry on, carry on, and I'll stay strong
Leave and let me go I will think of you, I know But carry on, carry on, and I'll stay strong
Someone else will keep you warm from now on Someone else will keep you safe from the storm But I'll be with you wherever you go So you will never be alone I'm going where the wind blows Going where the lost ones go
I will be with you I'm losing the love I found Crying without a sound Where have you gone? I will be with you You were my fool for love Sent me from high above You were the one I will be with you I'm going where the wind blows Going where the lost ones go
Leave and let me go Don't look back just let me know You'll carry on, carry on, you must stay strong
Nothing ever looks the same in the light Nothing ever seems to quite turn out right But when you realize that you have been loved You will never be alone I'm going where the wind blows Going where the lost ones go
I will be with you I'm losing the love I found Crying without a sound Where have you gone? I will be with you You were my fool for love Sent me from high above You were the one I will be with you I'm going where the wind blows Going where the lost ones go
Leave and let me go Baby I can't come along Carry on, carry on, you must stay strong
Copyright ©
Ginemarie
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2004-06-03 16:14:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'll keep you safe from the storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:33:15 PM AEST (User
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This is a nice poem. It seems as if you have come to grips with a lost love and our moving on maintaining a good friendship. This is a very positive poem to me. Thanks |
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Re: I'll keep you safe from the storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:25:58 PM AEST (User
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"But when you realize that you have been loved
You will never be alone"
That was such a nice pivot in your work, as you had various sequences of rhyme and what seems like a lyric chorus evident here.
A very well written and thoughtful poem.
Well done. |
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